Comments for flying wrestler http://www.flyingwrestler.com Thoughts on the professional screenwriting life by Erik Bork Fri, 04 Jun 2010 14:51:12 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 Comment on WGA guide to Television Writing by Beth Rohach http://www.flyingwrestler.com/2010/05/wga-guide-to-television-writing/comment-page-1/#comment-343 Beth Rohach Fri, 04 Jun 2010 14:51:12 +0000 http://www.flyingwrestler.com/?p=391#comment-343 Just read through the WGA guide. It was very interesting and informative. I will definitely keep this link, hopefully for future reference. Just read through the WGA guide. It was very interesting and informative. I will definitely keep this link, hopefully for future reference.

]]> Comment on Main characters and DRAMATICA by Erik http://www.flyingwrestler.com/2009/11/main-characters-and-dramatica/comment-page-1/#comment-294 Erik Wed, 21 Apr 2010 00:13:13 +0000 http://www.flyingwrestler.com/?p=301#comment-294 A lot of people have a similar view of the theory and/or software - I have struggled with it at times, myself. But to me, making sure you have four throughlines that meet Dramatica's criteria (with or without using the software) can elevate most stories hugely - and often what isn't working in a script can be traced to how the throughlines work. In my opinion, everything else is kind of gravy. It's easy to get caught up in trying to answer every question in the software and it can become very cerebral and not creative - I think it's best used as a resource to help you fix something you've written or brainstorm on areas of your script without getting too "completist" about it. But that can be hard to do... A lot of people have a similar view of the theory and/or software – I have struggled with it at times, myself. But to me, making sure you have four throughlines that meet Dramatica’s criteria (with or without using the software) can elevate most stories hugely – and often what isn’t working in a script can be traced to how the throughlines work.

In my opinion, everything else is kind of gravy. It’s easy to get caught up in trying to answer every question in the software and it can become very cerebral and not creative – I think it’s best used as a resource to help you fix something you’ve written or brainstorm on areas of your script without getting too “completist” about it. But that can be hard to do…

]]> Comment on Main characters and DRAMATICA by John Feeney http://www.flyingwrestler.com/2009/11/main-characters-and-dramatica/comment-page-1/#comment-292 John Feeney Tue, 20 Apr 2010 06:50:13 +0000 http://www.flyingwrestler.com/?p=301#comment-292 I have purchased Dramatica and I have read the book a few times. I went to one of the Dramatica User's groups but I still can't get a handle on their theory of story. Chris Huntly couldn't even give me a clear explanation of it. I got most of it. The Protagonist, the Impact Character, the through lines are all easy concepts but the software creates something that has no real connection to the story I am trying to create. I just don't get it but in my opinion, the King has no clothes. I have purchased Dramatica and I have read the book a few times. I went to one of the Dramatica User’s groups but I still can’t get a handle on their theory of story. Chris Huntly couldn’t even give me a clear explanation of it.

I got most of it. The Protagonist, the Impact Character, the through lines are all easy concepts but the software creates something that has no real connection to the story I am trying to create.

I just don’t get it but in my opinion, the King has no clothes.

]]> Comment on Emmy-Winning Writer-Producer of “BAND OF BROTHERS” offers Mentoring and Consulting to writers by Robert Pascoal http://www.flyingwrestler.com/comment-page-1/#comment-238 Robert Pascoal Fri, 19 Feb 2010 21:15:18 +0000 http://etb1.wordpress.com/?page_id=34#comment-238 I first met Erik at a San Diego Filmmakers meeting. With so many people offering similar services I was lucky to have had the chance to hear Erik speak and get to know him. I felt very good about choosing Erik and was not disappointed. We met over a Skype session and I knew I had chosen wisely, as he accurately summed up my treatment, pointed out the strengths and weaknesses, and delivered professional, constructive and helpful criticism that helped me move my project forward. It was good time and money well spent. I first met Erik at a San Diego Filmmakers meeting. With so many people offering similar services I was lucky to have had the chance to hear Erik speak and get to know him. I felt very good about choosing Erik and was not disappointed.

We met over a Skype session and I knew I had chosen wisely, as he accurately summed up my treatment, pointed out the strengths and weaknesses, and delivered professional, constructive and helpful criticism that helped me move my project forward. It was good time and money well spent.

]]> Comment on Emmy-Winning Writer-Producer of “BAND OF BROTHERS” offers Mentoring and Consulting to writers by Jeff Michaels http://www.flyingwrestler.com/comment-page-1/#comment-234 Jeff Michaels Wed, 17 Feb 2010 04:36:02 +0000 http://etb1.wordpress.com/?page_id=34#comment-234 In a town where it is difficult to separate what is truth from fiction Erik Bork is the real deal. His credits and accomplishments are well known. Erik brings his experience to you in a frank and friendly manner. My time with him improved my vision of my work and re-focused the screenplay, strengthening the concept. Always respectful, Erik sought ways to sharpen not just the project at hand but also my craft. His practical suggestions during our session brought positive results to all my writing projects. Thank you Erik! Jeff Michaels In a town where it is difficult to separate what is truth from fiction Erik Bork is the real deal. His credits and accomplishments are well known. Erik brings his experience to you in a frank and friendly manner. My time with him improved my vision of my work and re-focused the screenplay, strengthening the concept. Always respectful, Erik sought ways to sharpen not just the project at hand but also my craft. His practical suggestions during our session brought positive results to all my writing projects.

Thank you Erik!
Jeff Michaels

]]> Comment on Emmy-Winning Writer-Producer of “BAND OF BROTHERS” offers Mentoring and Consulting to writers by Trisha Howell http://www.flyingwrestler.com/comment-page-1/#comment-224 Trisha Howell Tue, 02 Feb 2010 20:28:18 +0000 http://etb1.wordpress.com/?page_id=34#comment-224 I have consulted with many script analysts, but Erik is the best! Not only does he have a very wide ranging expertise, but he is gentle, kind, full of creative ideas, and takes an active interest beyond the call of duty in the client’s work. My screenplay, The Journey, will be much, much better because of his comments. I plan to consult him again after I complete the second draft. There is no better way to spend your screenplay development money than to get a consultation with Erik! Also, his prices are very reasonable and competitive.—Trisha Howell, published author, actress, screenwriter I have consulted with many script analysts, but Erik is the best! Not only does he have a very wide ranging expertise, but he is gentle, kind, full of creative ideas, and takes an active interest beyond the call of duty in the client’s work. My screenplay, The Journey, will be much, much better because of his comments. I plan to consult him again after I complete the second draft. There is no better way to spend your screenplay development money than to get a consultation with Erik! Also, his prices are very reasonable and competitive.—Trisha Howell, published author, actress, screenwriter

]]> Comment on Emmy-Winning Writer-Producer of “BAND OF BROTHERS” offers Mentoring and Consulting to writers by Shahin Afnan http://www.flyingwrestler.com/comment-page-1/#comment-221 Shahin Afnan Fri, 29 Jan 2010 01:57:12 +0000 http://etb1.wordpress.com/?page_id=34#comment-221 Apart from being a great writer and giving us the benefit of his expertise and experience, Erik Bork was able to enter into the world of our feature length screenplay, giving my writing partner and I thought provoking analysis and insights. When you work with Erik you know he is truly listening and present every step of the way. A rare gift indeed. Thanks for being there Erik! Apart from being a great writer and giving us the benefit of his expertise and experience, Erik Bork was able to enter into the world of our feature length screenplay, giving my writing partner and I thought provoking analysis and insights.

When you work with Erik you know he is truly listening and present every step of the way. A rare gift indeed.

Thanks for being there Erik!

]]> Comment on Emmy-Winning Writer-Producer of “BAND OF BROTHERS” offers Mentoring and Consulting to writers by Esther Lee http://www.flyingwrestler.com/comment-page-1/#comment-219 Esther Lee Tue, 26 Jan 2010 21:32:12 +0000 http://etb1.wordpress.com/?page_id=34#comment-219 Our nonprofit organization discovered Erik after our short film script had already been written. As I am a copywriter and had never written a script, Erik's knowledge and constructive criticism was extremely valuable and helped us to greatly improve before shooting. The purpose of the videos was to raise funding and awareness of the humanitarian crisis in North Korea through the eyes of three refugees and one volunteer. Erik pointed out sections of the storyline that would have confused people unaware of the issue and provided suggestions for a stronger opening and closing. The finished videos can be found at http://vimeo.com/linkglobal/videos under these titles: Joseph, Jane, Shin, Nomads. We'll definitely be going back to Erik again! Esther Lee Our nonprofit organization discovered Erik after our short film script had already been written. As I am a copywriter and had never written a script, Erik’s knowledge and constructive criticism was extremely valuable and helped us to greatly improve before shooting. The purpose of the videos was to raise funding and awareness of the humanitarian crisis in North Korea through the eyes of three refugees and one volunteer. Erik pointed out sections of the storyline that would have confused people unaware of the issue and provided suggestions for a stronger opening and closing.

The finished videos can be found at http://vimeo.com/linkglobal/videos under these titles: Joseph, Jane, Shin, Nomads. We’ll definitely be going back to Erik again!

Esther Lee

]]> Comment on Emmy-Winning Writer-Producer of “BAND OF BROTHERS” offers Mentoring and Consulting to writers by Robert Gustafson http://www.flyingwrestler.com/comment-page-1/#comment-199 Robert Gustafson Wed, 20 Jan 2010 20:48:07 +0000 http://etb1.wordpress.com/?page_id=34#comment-199 My writing partner and I have spent a lot of time this year working on spec sitcom scripts and Erik has done two things for us very well. First, he's helped us focus our energies on writing only the scripts that make the most sense for our goals. Before we even began using his services, we spoke to him at length about what we wanted to achieve and he's offered to take a look at our simple outlines so we wont do any unnecessary writing. Second, he's focused our work on those projects. His notes have steered us away from gimmicks and helped us concentrate on character and story first. If he doesn't agree with a direction of the story or character, he thoroughly explains why and offers up possible suggestions to illustrate his points. Bottom line, Erik is a professional who understands character, story and structure. His notes are thorough and appropriate for our goals and specific to our project. I would highly recommend him. Robert Gustafson My writing partner and I have spent a lot of time this year working on spec sitcom scripts and Erik has done two things for us very well.

First, he’s helped us focus our energies on writing only the scripts that make the most sense for our goals. Before we even began using his services, we spoke to him at length about what we wanted to achieve and he’s offered to take a look at our simple outlines so we wont do any unnecessary writing.

Second, he’s focused our work on those projects. His notes have steered us away from gimmicks and helped us concentrate on character and story first. If he doesn’t agree with a direction of the story or character, he thoroughly explains why and offers up possible suggestions to illustrate his points.

Bottom line, Erik is a professional who understands character, story and structure. His notes are thorough and appropriate for our goals and specific to our project. I would highly recommend him.

Robert Gustafson

]]> Comment on Emmy-Winning Writer-Producer of “BAND OF BROTHERS” offers Mentoring and Consulting to writers by Elisa Fleener http://www.flyingwrestler.com/comment-page-1/#comment-198 Elisa Fleener Tue, 19 Jan 2010 05:47:41 +0000 http://etb1.wordpress.com/?page_id=34#comment-198 Shock. Disbelief. Just a couple of words to describe how I felt when I realized this talented pro was willing to consult at such an affordable price. Thank you! Synergy. Connection. Words to describe what our one on one meeting was like in LA. Everything Erik explained and brainstormed just made total sense to me... from character and plot development to steps to take for a rewrite. Things fit. Eric also has a nice disposition - not a Hollywood snob. Detailed. Efficient. These words describe the analysis he sent before our meeeting and the notes he sent via e-mail after our meeting. He will help bring life to your script! Shock. Disbelief. Just a couple of words to describe how I felt when I realized this talented pro was willing to consult at such an affordable price. Thank you!

Synergy. Connection. Words to describe what our one on one meeting was like in LA. Everything Erik explained and brainstormed just made total sense to me… from character and plot development to steps to take for a rewrite. Things fit. Eric also has a nice disposition – not a Hollywood snob.

Detailed. Efficient. These words describe the analysis he sent before our meeeting and the notes he sent via e-mail after our meeting.

He will help bring life to your script!

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