Script Consulting & Story Evaluation
Get clear, professional insight into your script or story idea –
and direction for how to move it forward.
Whether you’re developing an idea, working through a draft, or preparing a finished script, these consultations give you a clear, objective read on your story – along with practical next steps tailored to where you are.
As an Emmy and Golden Globe–winning writer-producer (Band of Brothers, From the Earth to the Moon), I bring that experience directly into my work with writers.
While most clients are screenwriters, I also work with a select number of novelists and documentary filmmakers shaping narrative projects.
1. Synopsis Package – $250
Clarify the strength of your idea before going further.
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- I’ll read a one-page synopsis/story pitch and meet with you for a recorded 1-hour call
- We’ll clarify what the story is really about, how it would read to professionals, and the strongest direction for it moving forward
- Also useful mid-project if you need to step back and reassess your story at a foundational level. Or for getting evaluation and direction on a page of loglines for potential projects
Choose your payment method:
2. “Fifteen & Four” – $325
Focused feedback on your opening pages and core story structure.
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- I’ll read 15 pages of your script along with a 4-page synopsis before a recorded 1-hour call
- We’ll examine how your story is taking shape on the page – looking at structure, character choices, and scene execution
- You’ll leave with specific adjustments that can strengthen the direction of the script as you continue writing
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- Option: Submit 25 pages with a 1-page synopsis instead
Select your payment option:
3. Full Script Read – $450-750
A professional-level evaluation of your complete draft.
- Includes a full read, a detailed 4-page written analysis, and a recorded one-hour call
- Identifies the key story issues and decisions affecting how the script is landing
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- Covers concept, genre, structure, character, and scene execution
- Provides a clear assessment of the script and practical direction for moving it forward
Choose your script length and payment method:
Consultations are non-refundable and must be used within one year unless otherwise arranged.
What Writers Have Achieved After Working With Me
Writers at all levels — from emerging to produced — have used these consultations to clarify their stories, strengthen their scripts, and move forward with confidence.
Erik’s expertise has helped me improve my pitching, my screenwriting and my TV writing. He really knows story (it’s obviously second nature to him), but is also able to step back and articulate big conceptual ideas in a practical way, which makes him a wonderful teacher. Over the course of the last year I have met with many television executives, and Erik’s coaching has helped me walk in with confidence. Working with him is like attending the film school I wish I had when I went to film school!
– Amy Taylor
Represented by Original Artists and Quattro Media
I would not have made it this far without Erik’s very direct and constructive criticism. At a time when it’s difficult to get a break, it’s great to be able to receive feedback from a top pro. I’ve worked with dozens of consultants, and his script notes are the best I’ve ever received. Amazing that such a talented writer does consulting. I will be using his services again in the future!
– Stephen Hoover
Grand Prize Winner, “Table Read My Screenplay”
Gold Prize Winner, PAGE International (Thriller/Horror Category)
I’ve worked with half a dozen evaluators before finding someone of Erik Bork’s caliber. Thanks in part to his invaluable insights, my screenplay placed highly enough in Script Savvy’s contest that they recommended it to producers. Erik has an exquisitely attuned sense of truth and is willing to give critical, hard-to-hear feedback so important in helping me hone my scripts. His points are always about the screenplay and not his ego. Perhaps most importantly, Erik listens. His intention is to work with me as an ally and I trust that completely.
– Jeff Cotton
Script optioned by Emmy-nominated and Peabody-winning producer
More Feedback From Writers
Selected excerpts from client comments
“Applying his principles around The Idea and PROBLEM led to a Fellowship win and a semifinal placement in the Austin Film Festival Screenplay Competition. I only wish I’d learned this years earlier.”
— Paul K.
“My script just won Best TV Pilot in the Emerging Screenwriters Competition, and I doubt that would have happened without Erik’s help.”
— Keith D.
“He breaks down what’s working and what’s not, and gives actionable, empowering advice. I’ve made real progress in my writing and in my understanding of structure and genre.”
— Anthony B.
“Working with him has taken my writing to a completely new level. I only wish I had started ten years earlier.”
— Marie D.
“He will relentlessly push you to achieve your absolute best.”
— Russell B.
“…simply the best story consultant I’ve ever worked with.”
— Marcus G.
“After Erik’s notes, I did another draft of my pilot and submitted to contests. I ended up placing for the first time ever — semifinalist in the PAGE Awards and quarterfinalist at the Austin Film Festival. I couldn’t have done this without his help.”
— Byron Q.
“He asks specific questions, challenges your thinking, and actively brainstorms with you to help you find the right approach to your story.”
— Benjamin S.
“He has a deep understanding of character and structure, and can quickly spot where things are working — and where they need a closer look.”
— Wade A.
“He dramatically improved both my manuscript and my writing ability. I don’t think my book would have made it to completion without his guidance.”
— Scott E.
“He is intimidatingly well versed in the ways of script and story, and yet I’ve never felt anything but supported.”
— Jaquie B.
If you’re ready for an honest, experienced perspective on your work, you can choose the option above that best fits your stage.